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Review:quixotic says:
Hi! I'm here for the Death Eater Challenge.

It's interesting to read a story written from Peter's perspective and experience his conflicting emotions. You've made him so human. So insecure and scared. I'm not sure whether I want to pity him or slap him.

I love your description. It allowed the story to flow comfortably between different memories and the present. If I had to pick a favourite line, it would be, "Eyes were the windows to the soul, someone had said once. Peter blinked."

Overall, this story had me glued to the computer until the very last line. Awesome job :)

Author's Response: Ooh thank you! I'm so glad Peter came across as very human - I think he was exhibiting the worst traits of humanity in this :p And I know what you mean about not knowing whether to pity him or slap him... he was in a terrible situation which wasn't his fault, but then he made a right mess of it and made all the wrong choices.

I'm quite proud of that line as well :p I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the compliments on the description - I worked a lot on the imagery in this so that is wonderful to hear.

Thanks so much for your review!

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