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Review:Lady of Tears says:
I'm here with your review!

Can I just say I forgot how much I enjoy reading about the Weasley family? I forgot what great characters and stories still like within each of them, especially those we didn't get to see very much of.

I thought Percy was characterized well. I felt comfortable being inside of his head. The thought processes he went through seemed to fit just fine for what happened in canon.

The only thing I wanted more of was fire, a little Gryffindor spark in Percy. I felt like you were almost there, but I think the backstory overwhelmed that a little. Not a lot, so don't worry. :) I didn't mind it being short, and I thought this was completely thorough, but a little more focus on the end instead of the past history might have done that.

I really, really enjoyed this and I hope you keep working on it!

-Lady of Tears

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review! I'm working on the third and final installment of this, and I wanted a fresh perspective before I came back to it. You were extremely helpful!

I'm glad the flow of thoughts felt natural, and that you liked Percy's characterization. He's actually been the easiest to write, so I'm hoping the other two chapters will have good characterization as well :) (You may find yourself with a re-request or two :) )

I do tend to be a very backstory-heavy writer. And I see what you mean about having a little more punch there at the end. I'll have to work on that; thanks so much for the suggestion!

Thanks again for the wonderful review! This was just what I needed :)

--Maggie


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