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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! We're totally on the same brain wave and writing odd Victoire one shots together, haha!!

I was really, really curious as to the conflicting thoughts (I know next to nothing about mythology) and LOVED when we learned it was both Teddy viewing her and her viewing her at the same time.

His thoughts seem to exemplify everything she dislikes about herself. He's thinking of how perfect she is, hurt that she doesn't see it, but he's thinking of her face, her outer shell, seeing the things he love about her just as she sees them and hates them. It was such a cool twisting, and I loved reading it a second time after figuring out just what was going on!

This was an really cool story. Your writing gets better every single time I read it, and I love the writing style you explored with this. Heavy descriptions and metaphors are so perfect for a shorter piece like this, and you used them all to benefit and enhance what you were saying.

Awesome story, m'dear!

Author's Response: It's another Jami review! ♥ Haha, great minds think alike!

I don't know anywhere near as much mythology as I should, but Victoire and Teddy seemed to work well for this, fitting with the myth and the story. I'm so pleased you liked the conflicting thoughts and the way that they were both viewing her at the same time.

You somehow always manage to pick up on what I hope readers will! I really wanted to highlight the differences in the way that they viewed her beauty, and twist the myth around a bit with Victoire actually hating her beauty rather than being in love with it.

Wow, thank you so much! It really means a lot to me that you think I'm improving! Thank you Jami!

Sian :)

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