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Review:MC_HK says:
Ooh I like this! Very well written, and I definitely like the description you've got going on. Your characters aren't exactly bold, but you've got personality in there, which is very important. The pacing is lovely, a bit slow, but it's good. I'm left wondering what's happening with Coralie's family and her father, so intriguing! I like the way you write Coralie's mother, very caring.

There are a couple grammar and spelling issues, but they are minor.

Otherwise, I like this very much! It's great so far, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. The characters are going to develop with some very important events, so that should also speed up the pacing a bit. I promise everything will be revealed in good time :)

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

x Ely

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