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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I knew it! I knew this chapter was going to have something to do with that explosion!

It was probably really obvious to everyone, wasn't it? But I was feeling very smart, so please don't burst my bubble!

BETH AND SEVERUS HAVE RE-MET EACH OTHER AT LAST! Well, not really at last, considering it's only been five chapters but you know what I mean! And they couldn't have re-met (is that even a proper thing?) in a better way - I honestly can't wait to find out what happens next!

I really love that even though this story is clearly very dark, much darker than the first, Sirius provides some much needed comic relief. I really enjoyed his comments about his motorbike and “You are not getting ready for a date." I'm sorry, but I am hardcore shipping Sirius and Beth right now.

But then I really like Sneth, too! GAH!

I like that we got to see more of Frank and Alice in this chapter, because I think they are really interesting underloved characters - especially when we know what happens to them in the end.

I loved how you linked this chapter with the last! My eyes are drooping now, but I'll be back for more as soon as I can!


Author's Response: No bubble-bursting here! But Beth and Severus have found each other at last, and that is enough to inflate anyone's bubble. (I'll knock off that metaphor now. I promise.) I'm excited that you're excited!

Sirius will always be around to provide a bit of comic relief -- it's sort of his job. :) He and Beth are like the good cop/bad cop duo, but in light and dark. Beth is moodier and Sirius is funnier, and you know, that sounded a lot better in my head. Ha! It's been a long few days. (Still not commenting on anything relating to any Siribeth!)

You poor thing, reading until your eyes are nearly closed. ♥ I feel bad saying that that makes me really happy, but it's just a great feeling knowing someone's reading a book I wrote before going to bed, you know?

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