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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I actually didn't count on having ANOTHER Severus chapter right after that first one, so I was so excited to start reading this one! I guess I just automatically assumed that it would go straight to back to Beth and we'd just have to guess at what Severus had done.

I ADORED this chapter! It was so fascinatingly dark and everything about it was written perfectly - I love this...this way you have with your characters, for lack of a better way of saying it, where you just get into their minds, let us see exactly what they're thinking. It is especially prominent with Severus - his mind is certainly a many layered thing - and I love reading the way you thinks and feels and acts and just...UGH! Poor Sev:( Although I guess he got himself into it.

On to the next chapter! This is just so exciting! I swear I have adrenaline coursing through my body I am just so excited about this book! I actually love how much darker it is than the first!


Author's Response: Bonus Severus! :) I can see why you thought that, though -- that is normally what happens, but I am glad you were happy he appeared again. Even though his story is much darker in this book too!

Even more than a week after you left this review, I'm still completely thrilled at your comment on how I get into character's heads! Writing characters and making them real and believable is my favorite part of writing, hands-down; I don't know why, but to me they're even more important than a fantastically wonderful and original plot. If you don't love the people you're reading about, why read at all, you know? And Severus is so complex that I don't think I could have tackled him at all without peeling back his many, many layers and trying to work them out. What I'm TRYING to say is thank you! ♥

Your reviews just make me so, so happy. I can't even. Thank you for leaving them!

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