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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oooh, I actually loved the darkness of this chapter - it was intense and kept me super intrigued, interested and hooked right until the end! And it also nice to see Severus again, even though he has taken a very, very dark path.

I absolutely love the fact that you appear to be introducing all these new canon characters that we know had involvement in the first wizarding war - Alice, Frank, Mad-Eye and the other Order members in the last chapter and now Lucius Malfoy in this chapter.

Oh, and I loved the dream! It definitely had a very creepy air to it, and I wonder if it means or foreshadows anything?

And that cliffhanger! I wonder what decision Severus will make - I think I know, but...ARGHH!

Sorry for the incoherent review. Once again I am too eager to get to the next chapter!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: It's definitely a good thing that you liked the darkness of this chapter -- because trust me, there's PLENTY more in store. :P Especially Severus's storyline! Which I suppose is natural, what with him being a Death Eater and all, but the man's got some difficult choices ahead of him. I just want to give him lots of hugs. Even though he'd almost surely reject them. ♥

Writing in all the canon Order characters was very important to me, if only for the same reason I tried to include the Longbottoms -- that being that not a lot of other people do. J.K. Rowling gave us such a rich world to play with and it seems like it'd be cruel not to! Moody's actually great fun to write, with his gnarled and distinctive personality. That's the great fun about a lot of the characters, actually. They're very lifelike and different, just like real people; I think characters are her specialty.

Aaand I've rambled on long enough about that for now! The dream was about Beth, and has no meaning in the future, but there is symbolism in it, namely in the footprints Severus sees in the dust.

No, no -- if anyone's going to apologize, it's me and the incoherence of these response. ♥ Your reviews are lovely! Thank you for them!


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