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Review:pattybuns_hpf says:
I very much loved reading these late nights of James and Lily. It was brilliant. I would desperately beg of you to continue but alas as I think about it, you've brought closure to what the idea of this story was all about.

I liked how you didn't go into chronological order with their nightly rendezvous. It was all jumbled but it seemed to connect after one another. Well, thinking of Lily and James spending time together at night and all, of course it's going to connect. Anyway, It was confusing at first but it somehow made sense to have the time jumping around. It was nice reading of their seventh year then to their first year and so on, and I congratulate you for making it seem so seamless a transition. I liked seeing the difference between the years. And also, the it kept everything interesting, I was always curious as to know how Lily and James interacted in the particular time you've set for them.

Oh gosh, I nearly cried in this last chapter. I was just so happy reading it and seeing how normal they looked and how great a family were. Still, that last sentence was a blow to my heart and it's really sad to think about the way they'd been so happy and then Voldy just had to come there and ruin it all. Oh well...

Thank you for this story, by the way, and it was truly a great read.

-Patty

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!

haha, the jumbled-ness was completely unplanned! I just was too lazy to try and change it, so I tried to make each one link in tiny ways. :p

Thank you so much for this amazing review, it really means a lot to me. You have NO idea how big my smile was when reading this!

- Kayla. :)


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