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Review:Owlpost68 says:
What? Really?? Really?

Anyway, definitely liked the house elves, and the Thunder clap was way funnier a second time :)

This was definitely the one way for Al to have to acknowledge his feelings for her, so there Al, you were evil in a past life so there's your karma lol

I hope the Ian Dan thing will get on with a little more next chapter, but since this happened... maybe not.

Maybe a little less of Al talking to us or to himself, it was quite a bit for this chapter.
Just a thought.

Nice plot twist though!

Author's Response: Thank you! thank you!
I'm glad you liked the house-elves, I liked them too!!!
and I'll try to minimize the talking to self thing, thanks for letting me know..
I promise I'll get around to Ian-Dana as soon as I get something..preferably a lightning bolt to my head...seeing as how that isn't happening,...sigh...
I'm really glad you liked the twist ;)
thanks once again for reviewing!! keep following the story!!
xoxo ;)

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