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Review:AlexFan says:
Every single story of yours that I've read has been interesting and I find myself wanting to continue onto the next chapter.

I think you captured the Black family perfectly, you can tell that they all think highly of themselves by the way that they act and speak. You've made Sirius stand out by making him a bit different in the way that he carries himself.

Usually the only person that we see Sirius as is this loud and arrogant person so it was interesting to see him as someone quiet at home who wants to stay out of his families ways.

Kreacher was also spot on, you got his disdain and hatred for Sirius perfect and I like how he managed to convey his feelings for Sirius without overstepping his lines as a servant.

The thing I like most is that Sirius's family isn't that they hit him like it's often portrayed but they do it in small ways like giving Regulus the family ring and other things.

This was a really interesting start and I'm looking forward to the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thanks! What a sweet compliment :)

Yeah, I think Sirius comes across as really normal compared to the rest of his family. He's not perfect or overly concerned with how he appears, and he's brave enough to say what he really feels even when it gets him in trouble. It's clear that he doesn't fit in here! But as you said, I didn't want to even approach the abuse territory, because I think that would be unbecoming of a proud pureblood family and was just a bit cliche.

I'm so glad you liked Kreacher! He's been fun to write and, looking back, I wish I'd spent more time with him--well, Regulus, I mean. I'll have to keep that in mind as I'm working to wrap up my final chapter for this story.

Thanks again for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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