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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello :) I'm here to review your entry for my challenge!

First off, can I just say I am AMAZED at how long this one-shot is, it must have taken forever to write and I can tell that an incredible amount of effort has gone into writing this, you should be very proud-it's superb.

I got to the end of this and completely forgot that it was for a quote challenge, you fit the quote so effortlessly into the story and I love that you didn't just use it for the purpose of the challenge but you continued to use it as a theme throughout the story, it was such a clever use of it.

The characters you've created we're brilliant. I like that each character wasn't one dimensional or boring. Tristessa and Tarquin are just pure evil, the apple didn't fall far from the Lestrange tree at all with those two. It's rare in fanfiction that someone creates a character or characters that cause such strong emotions for me but I absolutely DESPISED those two. I was thrilled when Taddie got his own ounce of revenge when he fought with Tristessa but at the same time I hated that he did because I knew it wouldn't go unpunished.

Taddie was such a great character too, I felt so sorry for him throughout the story, it seemed like there was nothing he could do right in the eyes of his older siblings. His thought processes were fascinating, I loved the themes of the wrecking ball and the dragon that you used. I liked the use of the 'Da-dum, da-dum, da-dum, da-dum' throughout creating a sense of panic. I really felt for him when Timeus was sorted into Gryffindor and cut ties with the family, though I could see why he did it, I wish he had written just one letter to Taddie.

I like that you had Taddie become close to Genie, it was nice that he had someone for company after Timeus went to Hogwarts and I love that they had each other during the sorting. I have to say I was so disappointed that Taddie ended up in Slytherin but I think it made more sense to your story that he did, he wasn't brave enough to chose Gryffindor like Timeus did but I still wish he had've been.

The description throughout it outstanding too. You've got this amazing plot in which so much happens but not at any detriment to the description. I knew at every stage of the story what Taddie was thinking and feeling and experiencing, it made me able to relate to the character all the way through. The little details that you've included really made the story great, things like Taddie banging his head on Abraxas Malfoy, the guessing of the Christmas presents and I have to say I absolutely LOVE the game of Who's the Liar? It's such a clever idea and could have come from JKR herself, the flavours you used were brilliant and the characters reactions hilarious.

I honestly cannot praise this story enough. I'm so glad you decided to enter my challenge. Keep your eyes peeled on the forums for the results!

Author's Response: Wow - just wow. Thank you so much, my cheeks hurt from smiling while reading this review. Thank you for such a great challenge! It was such an awesome idea and I probably never would have thought to write this story had you not created it - so THANK YOU :)

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