Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:NightStar says:
Ah sorry for not reviewing earlier! I'm an evil and greedy witch :P
Anyway, HOLYEFFINGGOD MARIANNEANDREMUS FTW.
You have no idea just how hard I ship them. THEY'RE SO ADORABLE HOW CAN ANYONE NOT LOVE THEM?!
Sirius/Gemma is going pretty sexy ;D But what's happening to my darling Gemma .-. Aeryn is annoying the hell lot of me (which is good!), James and Lily are YAY :D Still enjoying the 'new couple' feeling :D I'm so happy xD

As for the chapters, I would say that the story is going consistently so kudos to you. There are some parts of the chapters that are sudden but that's alright. Your writing again is awesome and I love it :D I adore your descriptions a lot! Also, I wanted to see what James did for Lily on Valentine's Day so I was a little surpised when it directly jumped to Aeryn getting attacked.
I really have to go now (thanks Mum >.>). APOLOGIES!

I will definitely write up a better review for future chapters! ^_^

With love,
~NightStar

Author's Response: Don't worry about it. You don't need to review every chapter, dear :D

I knowww, they are finally together!! It's taken 21 chapters, but it's finally happened. And you're right, how can you not love them? It's such a cute, forbidden romance XD

You'll see what's happening to Gemma in due time, don't worry!

I know things are sudden and kind of confusing, but there is a method to my madness, I swear. Everything ties in somehow - even the small little details. For instance, you'll see why I chose to have Luciana attack Aeryn in the next chapter ...which should be submitted sometime today XD

And your reviews are lovely, you don't have to write them better! They are seriously some of the longest reviews I've gotten on this story so far!!

:D


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 547
Submit Report: