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Review:rozen_maiden says:
I have been sitting at my computer for about two minutes (no joke), staring at this tiny review box and thinking - constantly thinking - trying to even just ... touch at the right words I want to say to you right now. But I can't. This chapter has left me completely dumbfounded. How have I not seen this before? It was just remarkable.
First, the beginning. The dystopic world you started with was written so well! Really, you don't see many bleak futures in fanfiction, and as a fan of 1984, this, of course, instantly got my attention. Muggles finding out about magic - I mean, really, that is a brilliant idea! And Rose: WOW. She is just a presence: her future self and her young self. Her whole personality is so volatile, and her love for her little brother comes across as extremely unpredictable. Combine that with her dark magic...
Yes, an incredibly well-written chapter, and I can already tell that your plot is beyond the level of anything else I've read.
- Mahalia

Author's Response: Wow, it took me forever to reply. With school starting up again, it's been really busy. Sorry for the wait

I'm glad you liked it! A huge fan of 1984 as well (read it two summers ago), I can see how it probably had an effect on this story, though I didn't intend it to. The focus isn't really on post-war world as much as it is on HOW it came to be that way. I'm glad you like Rose. I love her too :) She's had a rough time and that's made her slightly off-her-rocker, and that's incredibly fun to write because as you said--it makes her unpredictable to a frightening extent (though I will say she's tamer than my other MC haha) Anyway, thanks for the review :) I hope you keep reading and enjoying this story.


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