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Review:Rachel Payne says:
I think that this could actually be an awesome group of main characters, but it makes me wonder where this story will end up going. There isn't any sort of indication of major drama, there are a few love interests budding, and yes, each girl has her own problems, but with the way you introduced Athena in the banner, makes her life seem boring in comparison. Also, I'm wondering how you will tie in all the girls' problems to fit the master plot. Only time, and your hand, will tell.

Either way, this is a great intro chapter and I cannot wait to read more so please update again soon!

Best of luck with the writing
-Rachel

Author's Response: I didn't really think about a major plot at first, but now I think I'll have to. Athena's plot does seem a little boring, but it does get quite dramatic. It might not be as interesting as the others', but it's not just "Athena needs to get O's on her NEWTs!" - she does have a lot of other problems.

But thank you for reviewing!
Summer x


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