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Review:oblivescence says:
This is a great idea for a story, I havent read a fanfic like this about a someone who gets bitten by a werewolf before and it looks from this chapter like its going to be really good.
Great opening chapter, it introduced the story and character of Dominique really well. The first paragraph was a good bit of description that set the scene perfectly without putting in too many unnecessary details and describing too much (which I tend to do... a lot) and all the way through her emotions and actions were really believable.
I liked that the way you described Dominique didnt draw too much away from the action that was going on in the story. I wasnt sure about the Dom/Teddy thing at first but (as long as there isnt a cliche love triangle with Victoire) I like that it changes things up a bit and look forward to finding out more about them as a couple.
It definitely wasnt boring - the suspense was there all the way through and it gave loads of background to her and the story in general and was well paced, it really kept the reader interested.
Great start to the story :)
- Annie

Author's Response: Hey Annie! Thanks a ton for this review.

I am glad you like my idea, and this opening chapter. It's a relief to hear that you think it introduced Dominique well, and that the description was fine, and it was believable. More on Dom/Teddy is explained in the next chapters =)
It wasn't boring? Yay. I am pleased you liked it all in all, thank you.


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