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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm repeating myself, I know that I am and this is the last time I say this, I swear but I would really suggest slowing down this chapter, adding more descriptions, showing everyone's reactions and adding some transitions between scenes.

I'm glad that Lucy is making friends with people who aren't surrounded by drama though. At least now she can have a relatively normal life.

She also shouldn't be so quick to agree to go out with someone after what happened the last time she dated a guy. Besides, Oliver wasn't asking her to be his girlfriend, he was asking to go out on a date. There's a big difference right there.

Your story has a lot of potential and it would really benefit from a read through, proofreading and editing because you might across things that you want to fix. If you don't want to do that, you could always get a beta-reader they're very helpful.

Author's Response: Okay, thank you for the advice, I'll go over it!
~ Macy:p

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