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Review:AlexFan says:
Congratulations on posting your first story! This is an interesting start to it! I'm looking forward to reading more and finding out more about this fake-relationship.

I'm especially interested to see how Albus tries to convince Aaliyah to fake date him. Speaking of Aaliyah, I really like her. Clearly she doesn't take things lying down and she tells people to back off when they should. I've always MC's who are like that.

I'm also interested in Ronan and what part she has to play in this story as well, clearly she holds a lot of power and I want to see what she does with that.

Awesome start to a story and I'm excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response:
Thank you for such a positive review! Haha, I thought it may have came out a little boring. I'm glad you find it interesting though.

Albus has a different way of convincing people. That's probably where his Slytherin instincts kick in. Aaliyah is independent and strong willed. I was hoping that those things about her came through.

Ronan is actually one of my favorite characters. The thing about giving a character power is to make that character believable in how they use it and why they do the things they do. You'll definitely see her later.

Thanks again for the awesome review!
Next chapter is in the que!

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