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Review:RavenclawGirl11 says:
Okay hi... I'm True_Ravenclaw from over on the forums. Okay first of all, I can tell STRAIGHT away you are American. "Mom" is the American spelling, "Mum" is the British version.

Also, you spelt Mcgonagal wrong somewhere, and some points you need to work on your punctation. Maybe include some description?

But, on to the good stuff.

This is a good opening chapter, and leaves me wanting to read on. I think you have a really good plot and could take this to the next level, but, like I said add some description as I was VERY confused
Sorry for such a negative review,
~ Macy ;P

Author's Response:
Hello! My beta and I probably missed 'Mom' and 'McGonagall.' Sometimes being American fixing my Americanisms can be hard. Thanks for pointing it out. Description will slowly be added in. I'm sorry that it was so confusing.

Thanks for the review.

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