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Review:AlexFan says:
I got extremely excited when I saw that this was cannon. A lot of people seem to skip and change what happened when Lily got on the Hogwarts Express and was forced to sit with James and Sirius. I was glad to see though that you added in your own little bit to make it a bit different.

This was a lot more interesting than the last chapter. I felt like I always do whenever I re-read a book, I know what's going to happen, I know where the good parts are and I'm excited to get to them.

But anyway, I really really loved this and I think you're an awesome writer!

Author's Response: Hello again AlexFan, thanks for another lovely review :)

I'm glad you got excited when you saw it stuck to canon! I am a stickler for canon. This chapter was originally written prior to DH and had Lily share a compartment with Remus and an OC, but after DH I just had to change it to keep it canon! I found it rather hard to write the interaction between them all - due to the three line rule. So I hope it reads well and doesn't seem disjointed.

I'm glad you found it interesting - I couldn't help but have James and Sirius start off as they mean to go on ;) It's really good to hear that you find yourself getting excited to get to the 'good parts' :)

I am so glad you loved this, and thank you so much for the compliment :D You just made my day!

Haronione ♥


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