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Review:MargaretLane says:
I like the way you show Petunia having some concern for Harry and his friends and her feelings about how her sister was killed.

Hmm, I suspect Remus knows something or rather he doesn't seem like he remembers, but I think he KNEW something or got a hint of something. I do believe now that the Magus are to be trusted, because I think Remus's impressions here are likely to be accurate.

I like the way you show the reactions of various people to the disappearance, rather than just forgetting they exist.

I'd like to hear more about this bedtime story Ron heard. Hope he remembers it at some point. I'm guessing it'll be relevant.

I think you portray Remus's gentleness and understanding really well in the few lines he has. We immediately see him deal with the situation very differently than somebody like Mad-Eye would.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I really think that she does care about Harry and his friends even though she goes to great lengths to hide it, perhaps because of Vernon. It seems to appear when things get most dire for Harry.

Remus does know something about the Magus but it's been so long since he's read about them.

Ron will remember the bedtime story at some point and it will be relevant. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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