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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Yet another amazing chapter!

I really liked the section from Ron's point of view. I think you have aged both he and Hermione perfectly - and I can't imagine it would be a particularly easy thing to do - Ron, especially, I think would be very difficult. But you do an excellent job of keeping that slight, what's the word, goofiness of Ron while making it obvious that he has matured and grown as a person. And it's lovely to see that Ron and Hermione's relationship is still going strong, after all these years!

Oh god, that spell that Nott used in Goyle's section was nasty! And I am now seriously concerned that something horrible is going to happen to Octavia/Rose/Scorpius - I can't think why they would have been mentioned in the chapter, otherwise!

I LOVED the section from Harry's point of view. I like that there are these little hints of romance between Harry and Esme, because I think Harry needs something good in his life - though of course he'll never forget Ginny. I liked Elena too, and I am even more curious about Katerina - I just can't quite work her out, which I guess is a good thing at this stage!

Percy's section was very interesting - Arabela is another person I just can't figure out. Was she telling the truth about her parents, I wonder?

I really enjoyed this chapter! (Of course I did, i enjoy every chapter!)

Author's Response: Hi, Courtney!

I love writing from Ron's PoV. I wish I'd had more opportunities to do it, but I try to follow the following rule: always write from the PoV of the character who knows the least or has the most to lose. That's not usually Ron in this story. I'm really pleased that you feel like he and Hermione were aged realistically. It's hard sometimes, keeping them in character while making them seasoned adults. And I tend to think that they're still completely smitten with one another, but too stubborn to let it show all the time.

Nott finally perfected the spell that he messed up when he tried to kill Hermione. It took him a while, but I think we can all agree that's a good thing.

Harry is giving some serious thought to whether he could possibly fall in love again at this point, and Esme is doing the same. They're both old enough to know the risks. Things will continue to evolve between the two of them.

I can't really comment on what Arabela is or is not telling the truth about. OK, actually I can. What she told Percy about her parents is 100% true. Keep it in mind for later...

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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