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Review:AlexFan says:
Dorcas spends more time with the marauder's than she does with Lily and Alice and they're supposed to be her best friends. The scene with Remus turning into a werewolf confused me a little bit. I didn't really understand what was going on or where everyone besides the Forbidden Forrest. Remus is supposed to be in the Shrieking Shack and he's supposed to get escorted there by Madame Pomfrey and McGonagall. The way that those five were doing everything I'm surprised everyone hasn't figured out that James, Sirius and Peter are Animagi. You also had some really long paragraphs that I would suggest shortening. Other than that, this was a good chapter.

Sorry for the short review, I'm on a touch screen and I don't want to make anymore mistakes than there probably already are.

Author's Response: I did say that they were changing it up in the beginning of this chapter and last end of the previous. They are supposed to try this new place underground because Dumbledore thought it would be easier to kee him in that way. Guess not!

Thank you so much, and I'm happy you reviewed anyway!

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