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Review:AlexFan says:
Just something that I was wondering but, how has Dorcas never seen Dumbledore? I mean he gives a welcoming speech at the beginning and end of the year and he's usually always there for meal times. How has she never noticed him sitting up at the staff table and in the middle?

I'd never expected Lily to be one of those people who called someone names. I mean sure, she'd probably think them but I don't think she'd ever say something like that out loud. Besides, what has Emmeline ever done to her? From the sounds of it, Emmeline hasn't done anything wrong besides be jealous, something that a lot of girlfriends feel from time to time.

Oh my gosh, I can just imagine the looks and questions Dorcas must get with the hoof mark on her face. Anyway, not a bad chapter and relatively interesting. My favourite part was the part about the necklace that Sirius sent to Dorcas.

It wasn't that big of a deal but for some reason that was the part that stood out the most for me and I really liked it.

Interesting chapter and I'm sure I'll be coming back for more!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I don't know what you're talking about! I looked back into the chapter and I couldn't find what you were referring to. Sorry!

I think Lily does this because she knows (subconsciously) that Dorcas really does want to be with Sirius, and she thinks that Dorcas is trying to be skinny like Emmeline.

Yes, I thought that would be nice. I thought that brought in the Marauder aspect of it all.

That probably stood out the most because, even though it is a Sirius/OC story, there are relatively little scenes involving the two of them. It also solidifies their relationship as friends!

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts.

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