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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hi Gabbie!
This chapter was wonderful! I loved it!!! It's always so much fun to come back to the Misfits, because they're just so funny together! I love their banter, it's so perfectly written!
I loved how this chapter started out with the snowball fight, and they were having so much fun, but then Zabini has to be all creepy and spy on them! Haha.
He really is scary sometimes! I definitely wouldn't want to have to worry about being watched all the time! I loved how he interacted with all the kids in this chapter, too! It was this perfect mix if creepy and kind. Like when he gave Lav his handkerchief! That was so sweet. A little of the Force of Wills Blaise peeking through, perhaps? Haha.
I'm really intrigued but also nervous about the Halloween plans those Mistfits have pulled together! Hopefully they find out something good, because I can already tell that things won't go quite as they planned! Do they ever? Haha.
This was a fantastic chapter, and I can't wait for more! I'll let you know as soon as the next chapter if TFD is finished! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey there, Cassie its great to see you again as always. I have so much fun writing this story because the Misfits are just too hilarious together and making small children do bad things is just so tempting. Hahahaha.
I think a bit of lightness right before things get really bad was the intent for this chapter and they ewre having so much fun before Zabini showed up! The fact that he is scary is only amplified by Albus's POV and he tends to exaggerate things quite a bit. As we know...hahaha.
There's so much about Zabini that the kids aren't paying attention to and the fact that he was being rather kind and sort of teasing showed that he's not as evil as they think.
Giving Lav his handkerchief was a nod to A Force of Wills and after all, this Zabini is only the grown up version of the Blaise we love so much from that story. ;)
Oh, you should be nervous about the Halloween plan because it will go very wrong. I assure you that it will...mwhahaha and currently its going to be three parts because there's going to be so much happening all at once. And by the end, Zabini's secret will be revealed and the Misfits will be left wondering just what to do next. Mwhahahhaha.
Anyhoo, thanks for coming back! Audrey is up and waiting for you and Transparent is going to be up soon too! Hopefully I'll be back at the library and update for Abandon after that!
Wish me luck!
Can't wait for TFD!
Much love,

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