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Review:MC_HK says:
The name of the post should be "Daily Prophet", not "daily prophet." Also, you have a part where it says, "A silent, dry sob". I just thought that if someone's sobbing, it's more than just one. Just doing one sob sounds a little odd. I would also take out the "hexes" part of "her charms and hexes" because hexes are used on another wizard or living thing, not inanimate objects. Well, at least I believe so... I don't know, you can keep it in there, but that just kind of throws me off that Pomfrey would actually perform a hex. There are those few punctuation errors from before in here, as some are misused. Ah! And there's a "him magic knife and wand" when it should be "his". Sorry, just me being nitpicky

Otherwise, I really liked everything else. Not gonna lie, I fangirled a bit :) This is a really good chapter!

Love it, MC_HK

Author's Response: No, thank you! These are really helpful, even if you think you're being annoying for some unknown reason.

I'm glad you liked it, as this was probably the hardest to write for me. Thank you!

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