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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hello! I'm here with your requested review! :)

Oh re-writes, aren't they just wonderful? I'm about to do one of my own too so I know how you feel!

Plot plot plot! Well so far, you've managed to give us a lot of necessary background while also keeping some important details hidden to keep us interested. You had her interact with Lily early on and then once again later in the chapter, which is a great way to tie your original characters to the Harry Potter universe. I was going to mention something about the boats, but then I realized they'd have to go through the same process as the first years, silly me! I almost forgot this was Marauder's era for a few minutes, it's that good of originality! :)

And the characters! Oh, the characters! I can't even begin to tell you how well you've developed them already! Your original characters are just fantastic and have such a lot of backstory that we can really relate to them and whatnot. They have such good potential already, I'm excited for the next chapter even though I don't read Marauders era stuff very often! Great job so far on your characters and plot, you're doing wonderfully. :)

Feel free to re-request for future chapters or other pieces!
~MadiMalfoy x

Author's Response: Hello!!

I admit that I wasn't looking forward to it originally, but now I'm absolutely loving it! I hope your re-write goes well for you too!

That means so so much to me. I really tried to be mysterious but not too mysterious :)

I'm so glad that you like my characters. They are definitely one of my biggest worries, especially making them believable! I hope that they'll only continue to develop nicely. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter even though you don't usually read Marauders- that honestly have made me feel so much more confident.

I'll definitely be re-requesting for chapters in the future. Your review has been so lovely- it's honestly made my day so much better and even bought a few tears to my eyes.

x Ely


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