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There are seven deadly sins; Severus knows them well.

It is amazing how this one-shot suits my life.

I really like the way you wrote this story - the form of it. Quotes, division into three main parts - can't think of a better way. Each part has time to sink in before you start reading the next one.

Eighth sin. Hope. Probably the greatest of them all.

And this, he is sure, is what destroyed him most in the end.

Thank you for writing this.

This time anonymously.

Author's Response: Anonymous or not, please know that I'm so, so touched that something I wrote had such an impact on you. I had a big phase last year where everything I wrote drew from or was inspired by quotes, and I wish I could have used more than three in this one -- I had, at one time, five or so.

Hope is what destroyed him in the end, because he let it drive him towards death. Hope of being free of his obligations, of seeing Lily... I do think, at the end, Snape stopped fighting as hard as he had in the years before. He just wanted to be done.

But you know all this, I'm sure. ♥ Thank you so much for reviewing this story. Reviews like yours are why I do what I'm doing -- to make an impact on people. I am very humbled to respond to this. ♥

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