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Review:shez says:
Hi! I'm always asking you for reviews and you're always leaving me with kind and helpful words so I thought I'd return the favor :)

This is an extremely heart-pumping beginning, with the perfect amount of description so that I could keep reading (at a very tense rate! so suspenseful!) and not get bogged down with unnecessary detail. There are a lot of questions as it is just the prologue, but the tones of sadness and impeding danger are handled magnificently! It was very much like the beginning of a movie...

The only problem I had was that it was so short and I wanted to keep reading and figure out who Anaxandra is and what she's running from--but that's just me ;P it's the perfect length for a prologue.

Sorry if my review isn't helpful. I'm not much of a reviewer (or fanfic reader) but this is really good and makes me want to dive back into fanfic reading (I tend to get steered away with all the mary-sue/canon pairings where nothing ever happens but this seems so different!!!).

Happy days! :)

Author's Response: OMG! That means so much coming from you considering I absolutely LOVE your writing! Ah! Let the fangirling commence!

I've tried really hard to steer clear of the MarySue/canon aspect of writing, because like you said, it's boring. A lot of people tell me they don't really like Anaxandra at the beginning of this and then fall in love with her because I wasn't aiming for her to be very likeable at the start.

My other chapters are currently undergoing revisions, so I hope that if you've read the rest of this, that the other chapters have treated you as well as this one has in their current quality.

Anyways! Thank you so much for your review, it warms my heart :) You're amazing!

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