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Review:patronus_charm says:
I am not going mad but was this a 15+ before? Itís making me wonder whatís going to happen to need the extra rating!

Yay for topical news with the prisoner voting thing! I can imagine that sort of thing would anger Uncle Vernon! It was nice to be able to get more of a backstory to his death and to see that he was still lurking around in Harryís head. It made sense for him to considering what a dramatic impact he had on his life. I really canít wait to see how thing might change Harry and Petuniaís relationship though!

I really canít wait for the christening for two reasons. One, we get to see lots of the younger Weasley members who I really love! And two, I get to see how over excited Arthur will become and thatís always something really adorably to watch!

You make the normalcy of their lives really fascinating to read! With reading about the nosy neighbour who got on Harryís nerves, who had to look to look after baby James and then over enthusiastic petting. Gah it was just so adorable to read. Even if every chapter was like that I would still relish every second reading it.

Now youíre making me wonder about the Brian part of his name! Pottermore will probably say something about it. Or I hope it does, because I am really curious now!

I know itís bad to laugh and all considering they are at a funeral but the idea of Dudley being a PE teacher still cracks me up every time! I do have to say, I really love your portrayal of him throughout The Blossoming and its exactly how I imagined Rowling to write him in post-Hogwarts era given how she left it with canon.

The interaction with Petunia was really interesting. I sensed that she wanted a reconciliation with Harry given the whole hugging thing and being nice to Ginny, but I couldnít help but wonder whether that was due to Vernon dying or not. I would like to think that she did want to be nice to them regardless of the death, but I guess Iíll never know.

The description of the church was really brilliant! I could picture it perfectly from the vicar probably thinking Ginny was just fat to Piece Polkiss. The addition of him was really great as it really reminded me of JKís writing. In fact, all of your writing tends to remind me of hers. Thereís just this special thing about it which gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling like the books do.

That chapter was perfect. ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: You're not mad, lovely Kiana! Honestly, nothing super M-rated is planned in the near future, but with the building up of warnings this story is accumulating I felt it best to play it safe and up the rating.

You know, I was looking for something that might have been in the news at around the time Vernon died, and that just jumped out at me as absolutely perfect! It actually happened! And yes, we've not yet seen the last of Petunia.

I'm really looking forward to getting all my Weasels together for the christening too... Will all go smoothly? Hmm. Who knows. ;)

Can I just fall at your feet and love you for saying that the normalcy of their lives is something you enjoy about this story? Because I do worry that sometimes it's a little mundane, but then... It's just so nice to spend time with them all, getting on with life.

And thank you for your comment on Dudley! That's such a nice thing to see. I think that kid had 'PE teacher' written all over him from the day he took up boxing.

And and and. Gah. Your reviews make me so melty and fuzzy! Thank you so much for your lovely, lovely comments. You always make me feel confident and encouraged in my writing, thank you. I nominated you for best reviewer, because you totally deserve it.

Thank you again :)
Sarah xo


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