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Review:patronus_charm says:
If I thought the last chapter was amazing, I was blown away by this one!

Your description here was just superb! From describing the snow, the flower shop and then catching her sister and Ted in the alleyway each scene was vividly painted before me. Tie that in with Narcissaís lovely narration and thoughts it makes for excellent reading. Another note on the narration, itís so easy to follow and I get such an insight into her character and thatís something I rarely come across. ♥

Narcissaís thoughts about Muggles were really fitting. The right amount of disdain without it bordering on loathing. For her age, it was entirely appropriate. I liked the little humour you introduced about them too with her thoughts when she was paying for the flowers as it made her more real and less of a robot.

Another thing about her characterisation in this chapter which was really great was the introduction of her rebel side. Even if it was only a silent rebellion about which season was the better one it still made me feel as if the true Narcissa was shining through and with the events of the end of the chapter itís making me wonder what sheís going to do in regards to them.

The scene with Ted and Andromeda was wonderful. Iíve always loved those two just as much as Iíve loved Lucius and Narcissa mainly because it makes me wonder which pair was happier in the end and whether one coupleís form of love was truer than the others and it was shown perfectly here. The reckless freedom of Ted and Andromeda with contemplating running away for love probably put Narcissaís own feelings in regards to Lucius into question and I canít wait to see how itís followed up.

Another amazing chapter and I canít wait for the next! ♥

-Kiana

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