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Review:Courtney Dark says:
This chapter was absolutely and utterly amazing! I'm very tempted to say that it was my favourite so far, because there were so many things I loved about it!

First of all, the memory. Though it wasn't exactly canon, I loved every bit of it, and I was so happy that you managed to incorporate it in this chapter. I can't even imagine how much seeing that memory would have meant to Harry - and I'm really glad that Esme assisted him in procuring it. I felt so sad while I was reading it, though, because almost every person in that memory died before they turned 40. Sob!

George! I was so excited to see a section from his point of view, as the Weasley twins are quite possible my favourite characters. Well, they're up there with all the rest of my favourite characters, anyway. I loved George's entrance, how he was playing that cat and mouse game with his two slightly moronic tails. And oh my god, I loved out loud when they suddenly sprouted wings and frilly pink ball gowns - genius!

Ooh, Esme and Harry have a name to go on now! I am very intrigued and can't wait to see what happens next!


Author's Response: Hi, Courtney!

I definitely took a liberty or two with canon for Harry's memory, but it felt too good not to do it. I do so many terrible things to him in this story. I just felt like he deserved a moment of pure, overwhelming joy. It is very sad, though, to know that Harry was the only survivor among the group.

I absolutely loved writing George, from start to finish. The scene was so much fun. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

Harry and Esme are definitely making progress. The first solid lead they've really had.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such awesome reviews!

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