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Review:Trundlebug says:
I liked it.

I really enjoy any story that tries to add to the magical world of Hogwarts and what the students do there. Too often people get overly hung up on the books and forget to add to add their own flair.

The writing was good, well-paced, and there were only a few mistakes (most of mine have way more). I liked the characterization of Rose as I detected bits of both her parents in her and that's swell. Albus and the L twins were also written fine.

The ending was good and well-played. I truly didn't see it coming and its neat that you didn't go the other way with it.

Spoiler:

Too often we want our heroes to win at everything when that can really take a lot of the fun out of a story. There's a lot to be said for losing well.

It was an excellent read, and a fine way to spend ten minutes.

Reviewed for Blue

Ken

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a ton of fun with this. I really did love to write Rose, and thought a lot about who her parents were when writing.

I'm glad you liked it, and I just had to use the twins. I mean, it was waiting for me to do it.

I'm glad you liked it, and happy you chose to review this one!



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