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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Another amazing chapter! I'm pretty sure I've said that every single chapter, but they're all just so good! And I'm really looking forward to the next one, what with that mention of Sirius...intriguing!

Aw, Sirius:) Being all deep and meaningful and thinking about his future! I actually love serious Sirius (mwahahaha) and I hope we get to see more of him in the future.

Aw, Remus :) Yep, that was two aws in a row - this is obviously a very aw-y chapter. When he realized that Beth had been hurt and that he was the one who had done it, my heart honestly broke for him. And then when he told Beth that she needed to go to the hospital wing, I actually started to panic - I thought of Bill being badly scarred by Fenrir Greyback and started to worry that Beth was going to have some signs of lycanthropy. But all is well! I think...

Oooh, the end of this chapter was great! I sense some foreshadowing, I think! I can't wait to find out more!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: *cackles* Author's notes are either super exciting, or a pain in the butt. I'm sure you know the feeling! There are times when Sirius can settle down and be actually pretty mature, which probably surprises the heck out of his friends. He is definitely a huge, huge contender in the coming books, which is something you've already probably noticed in ITR. Much more of him to come!

I think one of the best things about my Marauders (a term I use to distinguish them from canon, where Beth sadly doesn't exist) is how protective and brotherly they all really are towards her. ♥ I probably shouldn't say that, since, well, I wrote them. But I'll say it anyway, and have a bit of a selfish moment. :) Rest assured that all is well where Beth's scratch is concerned!

I sort of suck at foreshadowing, but that was a definite attempt at it. Haha! Thank you for yet another awesome review!!


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