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Review:marauderfan says:
Hahahahaha. I love parody stories, so thank you for requesting! The first section, in particular, was perfect. I loved that you made fun of all the stereotypes of Victoire and Teddy and how perfect the two of them are (even funnier when compared to the rest of the story, in which Victoire is a mess and Teddy is manipulative!). Oh and the end, calling them Viddy/Tectoire - couple names always kind of seem silly to me, so I liked that you threw in a completely nonsensical and stupid-sounding one :D And your jab at the media for all the "sexiest couple" rubbish they always have.

It's difficult to point out things that don't work in a parody, because they're not supposed to make sense. I suppose you could go into Teddy's thoughts more - like, what's his motivation behind this new recipe? Does he actually think this "food" is going to be amazing? Or is he trying to prove to her that he is in fact the better cook and she should stay out of the kitchen? Or does he want to see how everyone reacts to terrible food?

But as I said, take that CC with a grain of salt because it's a parody and anything goes! I really enjoyed this - great work!

Author's Response: Hey there :)
I did see that you'd listen out parodies under things you like to read, so I thought that you'd be a great critic! I bet you've read plenty of pretty good parodies.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and got all the jokes I made using those stereotypes. Couple names are very stupid and funny. I just HAD to do that :P And the media is so typically... the media. Don't get me wrong, I think we do have some excellent news agencies, but then there are the other who can't live without some gossip!

I think his motivation was just to pull some sort of prank on Vic, while making sure that he got what he wanted. I'm sure he knows that the 'food' will turn out disgusting, I'm also certain that his confidence in Vic's limited knowledge in the kitchen made him so cocky about it! I think they're both aware that Teddy is the better cook though :P

just thought I'd drop in some answers to make it clear :)

thanks a lot for this! I'm glad you like it!

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