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Review:AlexFan says:
I knew that I would like your main character when I got to the end of the first paragraph. I couldn't help laugh when I read the part about how she found Hestia smiling so much a little bit weird. It sounded like something that I would think.

I can totally relate to your character's personality, if she were a real person I don't think we would've gotten along because we would be too alike but I can definitely relate to her. She's very realistic and maybe because she sounds so realistic it'll make it easier for me to understand her thoughts and actions later on in the story.

I feel so bad for your MC though, she's got almost no one in her life to care about her except for Lily and Alice (they just seemed like the ones she was closest to).

The only thing that I can point out is that Lily didn't live in Spinner's End. Snape lived in Spinners End and Petunia made fun of Snape for living in such a horrible neighborhood. I can't remember exactly where Lily lived but I know it's not Spinner's End.

Besides that I like the Prologue, I got to know the main character and about her family life. You managed to tell me a lot of information without having it shoved in my face like it usually is. Well done on that!

Author's Response: I really do like her a lot, too. Sorry for my incessant self-love, but I do. I think she's just very blunt, which I've always appreciated in characters, because there is usually a lot of mystery, and she just doesn't have that. Well, not yet anyway (hee hee hee)

She has an absolutely horrible life. I think she copes very well because of the people she's grown up along with. It's great!

Really? Oh gosh, I'd always been under the impression they both lived in Spinners End, and that's the reason they became friends. Sorry about that, I'll change it when everything else is validated.

I'm so glad you liked it, and I can't wait to hear more of your reviews!


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