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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello there! Calling in for Team Blue!

Can I just say how impressed and almost scared by the sheer amount of novels you have! I've never seen someone Balance so many and so diverse ones at that too! also apologises for too many/lack of capitals it's a European Keyboard.

Having read quite a bit of your work now, I have to say you've developed a really lovely Narration style. It's got the right amount of humour and cynicalism in it and it makes for a very entertaining read.

The spilt Narration between multiple characters worked really well and it created a nice contrast into the minds of all of the characters and I already got a feel for them.

I really loved your bit about Luna. Even if it was only a small part I thought it was wonderful because so many People seem to final to catch all of her quirks but you managed brilliantly.

All in all, I thought it was a really great start to the Story and I can't wait to see where it goes! :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey Kiana!

Hehe, sometimes I'm a little bit scared by how many novels I've started as well and I stop to think how I'll update all of them but then I stop thinking about it. There will be a couple more coming out soon.

Thank you, I'm so happy to hear that my writing has gotten along and that it's better than it used to be. I'm also glad to hear that you found this entertaining.

I was worried a little bit about the narration there and wondering whether I should take it out so I'm glad to hear that it worked instead of just making the chapter choppy.

I wanted to include Luna so badly in the first chapter and I managed to do it after staring at my screen for a very long time!

Thanks so much for the review!


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