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Review:patronus_charm says:
WHAT! GAH! CANNOT COPE WITH COMPLEXITY OF CHAPTER! TRYING TO FIT TO CANON. FAILING BADLY. GAH.

Where to start? Dumbledore knows about Peter? I feel as if I'm reviewing Bad Blood all over again and trying to fit different theories and ideas into the Story! (Also random captilisations are caused by a European Keyboard, so sorry about that!)

The only Thing I can Think of that fits is Peter somehow oblivating Dumbledore's Memory and killing Beth before doing what he did to Sirius. It's a hard timeframe to work with, but it's the only Thing which is coming to mind at the Moment.

Gah the Meeting with Timothy. Man, that was so awkward! I could Picture it so painfully in my mind it was just horrible!

Poor old Remus! I really felt for him here! I'm glad that Beth's still being nice to him. Writing this it makes them Sound as if they were Little children, which I guess is sort of true! The scheme does interest me, but I just can't think something is going to go very, very wrong!

Ok also the fact that she's only told Remus so far is screaming suspicous to me. Gah I can't handle this!!!

Then the last part! I'm really glad for that because in my head Canon Lily was always pregnant at this Point. I'm not really sure why but seeing it happen here made me really happen to see someone else agree with me.

Though the part in italics! What was that all about? Was it Lily? Was it another voice? Who knows. Well, you do, but let's Forget about that for now!

Another excellent chapter, Rachel and I see what you mean about the snowball! I can't wait to see if it goes Canon or AU!

-Kiana

Author's Response: -blabbers- I already warned Sarah about this, but a lot of the things addressed in this review are things I just can't tell you get (mostly because you'll be getting the answers before you know it)! I WANT TO TELL PEOPLE EVERYTHING STRAIGHTAWAY. I am going to bite my tongue and carry on and I just really, really hope now that what I have written will conform nicely to people's expectations. I don't know why that's hit me all of a sudden, but I've only now come to grips with the fact that ending an entire series is a very scary thing, and who knows if I've done it properly?

Oh, Timothy. :D This worked perfectly, too, in an ironic way, because my own personal Timothy reappeared in my life just as soon as he reappeared in Beth's! All the Timothys of the world need to get lost, I swear. But Remus! Oh, Remus. He'll crop up again before the book's end... mostly.

THE THINGS I CANNOT TELL YOU COULD FILL A WHOLE BOOK. THEY BASICALLY ALREADY HAVE.

I find it not hard to believe that Lily would have been pregnant at this point! It's cruel, really, to have acted on that, but driving little knives into people's hearts is what I do best. That bit in italics at the end was just Lily thinking -- I write all my "thoughts" like that in italics. She's thinking of when she'll tell James. :)

Thank you for reviewing, as always! ♥ I'm SO excited for you to read the chapter I'm about to post. So excited!!


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