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Review:patronus_charm says:
HELEN!

Bahaha your beta note really made me crack up! I'm not even sure why but it's just the way you worded it. Yes, I am responding to your A/N before the Story and I'm not really sure why. Gah only four more chapters :( I hope there's a Sequel or some sort along the way!

also, apolgises for random captilisations, I'm also travelling and using a European Keyboard and I'm suffering for a large bout of laziness.

On with the Review though!

I really loved this chapter, I really thought it was a really iconic part of James and Lily's relationship and showing how horrible the war is.

The opening Scene was great! That had me cracking up to! I loved the General Maruaders banter, but it was interspersed with serious things too and that really made it work. With Lily's inner reflections and thoughts about Sirius and Mary, it made the Moment tender too.

I'm actually sad that Lily's moving out, which is weird considering how horrible Petunia and how her mum's going through a bit of weird stage at the Moment, but I still love those Scenes all the same. I think it's because I somehow don't hate your Petunia which is very odd because that can't be said a lot for her!

I really felt for Lily in this chapter, all this inner conflict she was having and it still isn't settled despite James' Proposition of her moving in with him. It makes me wonder whether it ever will be...

All the James and Lily fluff = ♥

Gah, I really loved this chapter and I'm sorry this Review isn't amazing, but I really hate this Keyboard! Congrats on all of your Progress by the way ;)

-Kiana

Author's Response: OH HAII KIANA!

I like your unconventional way of starting your review. it's nice. I appreciate it. Kudos for you for addressing my authors note, ahahahahaha.

I HATE THOSE EUROPEAN KEYBOARDS. I swear they make the @ symbol the most difficult to find and like YOU NEED IT RIGHT so that's all forgiven.

Plus, random capitalisation is always fun, right? I think it adds variety.

I had a LOT of fun writing that opening scene. it was so nicceee to just have a bit of a fluffy marauder banter + family because well... I don't have a lot of chapters left and basically everyone is going to die.

yay.

Damn, I hate the Marauder's era.

IT IS SAD. I kind of think she's half ready and half doesn't have much of a choice, which is kind of how the whole buisness is to me. I feel like it would have happened anyway, but she would have taken more time, you know?

Anyway, thank you for the lovely review!

-Helen


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