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Review:blackballet says:
This was really funny! I enjoyed myself, even though I do prefer much darker, deeper, longer stories. This was really funny, and I didn't even see it coming when the ring was in the food! I did, however, see it coming when the ring wouldn't be in the box. Take out the part where it felt a bit heavy, and it will flow much nicer. No one will even see it coming! Again, very funny and light-hearted. I loved it!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, and had a good laugh! I put in the bit about the ring not being in the box, because I do think it would be one of Teddy's concerns to check before their arrival since they planned on re-doing the whole proposal. I am quite pleased that I managed to hold the suspense with the ring being in the Turkey though.
You loved it? :D :D
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