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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh my god, Val, I seriously feel like i was just with all these women/girls for the day and I'm exhausted!!! You did such an awesome job showing their chaotic lives, and I loved the sarcastic/fun personality of Autumn.

I feel like people think large families has to be reserved for the Weasleys, so I LOVED that you gave us this awesome big family Christmas scene with an entirely separate family! Molly Weasley doesn't have the market on children, after all.

And of course you slid in some of your Frenchness into this, which I always love. That and the new adopted baby (who I hope we get to meet!) were awesome little details to help give us a good picture of this family and to open up the world a bit from the small Hogwarts tunnel we often get with next gen.

I'm such a sucker for Bill/Fleur (your grounded for that, btw) and their kids, that I loved seeing Dom as one of our MC. I hope ;). Everything about them felt very natural and like actual friends, not just characters you put together for the sake of plot. Also, do we get to go to France and visit Fleur and Louis?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I really liked this first chapter, m'dear!

Author's Response: Trust me, that many females grouped together can only be exhausting (and I speak as a female too, random person hypothetically reading my response, so no need to get onto your feminist battle horse)!

People do seem to think that large families are only for the Weasleys, right? As someone who has a twenty first cousins, I wanted to recreate the sense of chaos and agitation that comes with family gatherings -- and come to think of it, this was quite mild compared to my family!

Yes, you do meet the adopted baby! (Also, of course there would be French, because I'm a snooty bilingual who likes to show off ;) )

I AM SORRY, PLEASE DON'T GROUND ME. But I've always felt that at least one Weasley couple would get a divorce (there's a 1/3 statistic, after all), and Ron and Hermione were overdone...

Thank you for the review, lovely!


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