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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi lovely! I saw you post that you had a new story on the forums and wanted to come check it out!

I really felt bad for Lily in this first chapter, haha. I can't imagine it'd be easy for her to find a job without wondering/being told if it was only because of her father that she got it and not on her own credentials. She just needs to show them that, yes, she may be daughter of Harry Potter but she's still intelligent and capable on her own! Even if she did get hired because of her dad, that doesn't mean she can't prove to them that she's better than anyone else would have been.

Although... she isn't off to the best foot in this chapter, hahaa. Poor thing. Her family teasing her felt really realistic, and I like the combination of 'oh it's okay,' and 'wow you really messed that up' between the cousins. It made me giggle.

Her new boss seems a bit like Slughorn. He seems absolutely thrilled to have daughter of HP (and like a total suck up) in the office, where Bridget seems like she couldn't care less if Lily messed up and was fired on the first day. Well, I think she'd actually quite enjoy it. I can imagine she's just annoyed and maybe slightly jealous of Lily, so I"m excited to see how their relationship plays out.

This was a really awesome first chapter, Jenny!!

Author's Response: Hi Jami! Thank you for taking the time to stop over here and read my story! It means a lot :)

Thanks! I imagine it being really hard for the Potter and Weasley kids because of the pressure that surrounds them. You need good grades to even be considered for an Auror job so she has the capability but people will always wonder!

I wanted to give the cousins some different and contrasting personalities - Roxanne the joker, Rose the uptight one, etc, so I'm glad you appreciated that!

Yes, Ernie is definitely a character. I hadn't even realised the Slughorn comparison until now! Bridget is so fun to write, and yes jealousy is definitely a part of it but not entirely! ;)

Thank you lovely! :)


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