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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hahahahahahahaha!! This was so cute! :D

I loved how you described Dudley's boredom and insatiable curiosity for magical things. He was very funny, wanting to try a magic stick for himself! When he began to dance, I cracked up. You gave enough details so that I would know exactly what was happening, and yet, it wasn't too wordy. :)

Hahahahahahaha, Petunia and Vernon trapped in a music box! And Dudley wanting them to go back in the box after they had come out! So funny!! I thought it was great that Dudley wanted to kind of get away from their annoyingness.

My only complaint about the story is that Dudley's marriage to "Caroline" was a little bit vague. I would like to see something like, "Dudley married Caroline, a professional ballroom dancer." Or something of the sort. I just need a tad bit more background on her. However, I know that this is a one-shot, and it might be your intention to be vague on Caroline's origins. If so, then just ignore me. ;)

Brilliant work! Such a funny, original piece.

May your pen never run out of ink!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note about adding a little more information about Caroline. Thank you for pointing it out!

This was a fun story to write and was the first parody I've written. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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