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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello, here for our swap. I couldn't resist picking a founders one after reading Ready. Yet again, I wasn't disappointed! I fear I may have developed a new love for founders stories.

I really loved how you structured this, I thought it was brilliantly clever. I love that you had their thoughts so connected and the way that one ran into the other worked so well. Even thoguh you jump from one perspective to another it doesn't interrupt the flow of the story at all.

I also really enjoyed the relationship, or lack of, beween Helga and Salazar, it was just so tragic and had me wondering what happened to them, why are they apart if they're so in love-it's sad!

The characters you've created fit really well with the little snippets of information we know about them and I really like that you've given Salazar a more human side beyond his pigheadedness about purebloods.

All in all, beautifully written, I loved it! Thanks for the swap :)

Author's Response: Hi again Dee! I'm just a little behind on my responses, but better late than never right? I'm so happy you enjoyed this!

I was worried that the interconnected viewpoints would be confusing, so it's great to hear that you didn't have trouble reading it. It was sort of an experiment for me, and it was definitely an interesting challenge to weave both voices together :)

It was sad for me to write my favorite pairing coming to this fate, so I definitely understand what you mean! I always thought Helgazar was a great "tragic romance" ship, and this is the first time I've really explored that. I was intentionally kind of vague about the details of the split, and I'm glad that didn't put you off.

This sort of goes hand in hand with my other Founders stories, so if you'd ever like to check them out feel free! It makes me happy to hear that I just might have made a Founders fan out of you :). Your reviews are always so lovely, Dee! Thank you so much for swapping with me!

--Maggie


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