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Review:MC_HK says:
I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I cannot stress enough how important it is that you make it clear who is speaking. There are moments I find myself very confused because you space each quote, but sometimes the person who says it isn't the name that comes after the quote. For me, at least, this makes it very hard to figure out who is talking, especially in a fast-paced chapter like this. You also have a few words missing in the beginning.

I love love love how you wrote Lily and Remus's point of views. Those were so well written, and I enjoyed those a lot. The who chapter was very good. MC_HK

Author's Response: I don't know why I do that. I think it's because I enjoy reading work that is written like that, even if it is a bit confusing. I don't know why I like to read like that at all, but I do. I'll go over this chapter right now to fix it up!

I'm glad you liked the other characters, by the way. Thanks for your review!

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