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Review:silverashes says:
Beautiful...that's the only word I can think of that describes this. Strangely beautiful. This might be an odd comparison, but you write like F. Scott Fitzgerald. When I read any of F. Scott Fitzgerald's work I feel mesmerized by his words, and, honestly, you've done exactly the same. It's just so easy to read. The story and words grip the reader, begging them to keep going. Everything is so fluid and enchanting.

I was slightly confused at first. I wasn't sure who the yous were referring to. At first I actually thought it was a narrator talking about Victoire and Teddy, but as I continued reading I began to put pieces together! Then at the very end it all made sense. I think that slight confusion in the beginning adds to the captivation of the reader. I loved it. I loved trying to figure out who she was referring to. Victoire's own confusion was infused into the wording and the story itself. I was more connected to the character because I felt like I could understand what she was going through. Am I even making sense? Gah, I hope I am!

I'm just so in love with it all. You've created such an interesting character She has so many layers. In the beginning she tries to resist this monster inside of her, but slowly she begins to let her take control. Soon her and the monster become one. Brilliant. Absolutely, stunningly, brilliant.

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Hi Rachel!!

Wow, that's such an awesome compliment! I'm so excited that my writing kept you interested, and I'm not even going to comment on the comparison to F. Scott Fitzgerald because I'll just turn into a puddle of feels ♥

I really, really wanted to keep people guessing with what on earth could be going on, but was worried the confusion would be too much, so I'm really happy that it made sense by the end. You're making total sense, and I'm seriously so thrilled that trying to figure out what was going on kept you hooked ♥

I was pretty nervous about this piece because it is a bit odd, haha, so knowing you really enjoyed it has made me feel so much better! Thank you so much for taking the time to read it ♥ and for an awesome swap!

Jami


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