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Review:HarryPotterFan_1 says:
Hey, here for the review swap
I absolutely love how you've captured Lockhart's character. You had me laughing in quite a number of places.
In the books we only see Lockhart as an adult and reading your one-shot, I can see how it all started from when he was a teenager - taking credit for what other people do and his need for fame.
I also love how you've incorporated some of J.K Rowling's character, such as James, Sirius and Bertha, it's original - I haven't read many Marauder's Era stories where they have Lockhart at school with Harry's parents.
Overall a lovely one-shot and you have a great writing style. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that seemed like a believable teenage Lockhart. I couldn't see him being any other way. (In fact, I bet that when he was about 3 and learning to draw, he insisted that he had invented crayons. :P )

I really enjoyed writing the cameos of those other characters. After all the absurd things Lockhart did to "help" Harry, I felt it only natural that he'd done the same thing a generation before! Thanks so much for your review!

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