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Review:lovethepotters says:
I was slightly disappointed reading this chapter because I knew there wasn't another chapter waiting for me (hint hint, update soon) :P

YAY JAMES IS HERE! *jumps around* sorry, I might have a slightly unhealthy James Potter obsession haha! I'm glad to see he made his first appearance in this chapter! Trust him to interrupt Lily's moments with Snape though, poor poor Severus :P

Just a quick question: during what year does the Hogsmeade incident occur? I'm guessing Snape's attempt to ask Lily out occurs in fifth year! Just curious :)

As usual, a few minor grammatical mistakes but they can be fixed in a jiffy! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Haha, aww. I should apologize about that. I have somethings written out, and I've been meaning to update this story, but I've been so pressed for time, it's crazy!

Haha! I understand you. I have spent so much time gushing over James Potter myself :P I'm glad you're happy! And yes, something had to be done, after all, it is James we're talking about!

This happens in the third year. He's trying to ask her, but hasn't worked up the confidence yet.

Thanks, once again :) I'll make sure I update this soon!


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