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Review:DougA says:
OK, interesting chapter. Pacing is a little slow, but it's your story, and there is nothing wrong with letting things build. Things don't have to be all flash/bang at the start. We get that Petunia might actually be concerned about Harry, and a start of the buildup to what our trio (quartet ?) are going to be learning. I like the use of Remus, and that he seems to be using his wolf senses to check for the kids. I like Remus. One of my favorite stories with him is Echoes From the Chamber by hubris. It hasn't been updated in a while, but makes good use of our favorite werewolf. Interesting use of the letter writing by Ginny. I assume this will get her more into the main part of the story. All in all, well done. Til next time.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I'll look at the chapter once more to see how to pick up the pace just a little bit.

Ginny has her own path to follow first before joining the Trio.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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