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Review:Quinn says:
You've probably heard this in so many ways, but I like to add my comment to the part: I love your writing! It's absolutely brilliant! You are not just good at placing the setting and setting things flow smoothly, but your characters are real! Their dialogue are pleasantly believable and true to their character. Loving how it all is turning out; enjoying how you turned Lucius as a victim in this story, makes him more lovable.

Ooh, I love how Smirk Sneer Slytherin (a witty commenter from the review page of this chapter) thinks about Astoria's presence in a muggle grocery store. It is an honest guess and it does make sense--knowing Astoria's friendlessness is just plain weird to both Draco and Hermione.

Lovely chapter, you brilliant writer you! Keep the hard work going! Cheers! -Quinn

Author's Response: oh, wow. I'm overwhelmed with your amazing reviews and kindness. thank you so so much for taking the time out to review so much. it really means a lot as a writer. I like knowing what readers are thinking.

lol yeah, the polyjuice theory is very interesting...who knows? that may be the reason or it may not be. you'll have to wait and find out lol. but Astoria may be completely sincere too...

thank you so much, again, for your reviews!

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