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Review:potterfan310 says:
Squee!!! I don't think this chapter was up before so yay!

AL's getting suspicious, I hope he work it out soon or at least asks one of them who makes up some story and then asks the other and gets a completely different story.

Haha, Phina's cravings.

How the hell did Rose work it out?? That girl could be the next Sherlock Holmes. :p

"Do you want the sarcastic version, the scientific version or just the story of how I ended up like this?" - And this is why I love Phina's personality!!! :D She's amazing.

Aww I think it's nice Phina now has friends. Or at least considers Rose and Lily friends. And I really hope Lily's persuasive-ness will make sure that Phina hurries up and tells Al because he really needs to know!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: The chapter wasn't up before, this is a brand new chapter!

We'll see if he works it out soon, he might and he might not. Who knows (well I do but I don't want to give it away.

I've heard that pregnant women have strange cravings when it comes to food so I figured I'd add that in. Well, Rose I'd the daughter of Hermione Granger, the girl who brewed Polyjuice Potion when she was twelve.

I'm so happy to hear that you're liking her character so far! People make friends in strange ways, Seraphina's way just happens to be through pregnancy!

Thanks so much for reviewing!


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